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Начертите его логическую схему.105Dear StaceyThank you for giving me the opportunity to try out English lessons via Skype.[postulate] Now I can see that I cannot accept your offer.…[postulate specification] So, as you see, the conditions you offer cannot meet myneeds properly.I wish you and your colleagues successful work and great students.Sincerely yours,Maria Sancheza) [1] The professional level of your teachers is not enough for my purposes. [2] Besides, I have already found a satisfactory solution for my problems in learning English, [3] which will cost me less money than your services. [4] Moreover, I am reallyinterested in British English and feel that I am not quite ready for learning AmericanEnglish that you teach.b) [1] I understand that the prices correspond to the high professional level of theteachers, [2] but taking into account my financial situation at the moment, [3] Iwill have to choose less expensive lessons.
[4] Moreover, I would like to work on myBritish English before switching to American English.c) [1] My major reasons are my financial state and [2] specific requirements to thelearning process [3] that you are not ready to fulfill.Sample SchemePostulatespecificationPostulateReasonReason4Effect3Cause2Cause1106Task 3Во втором типе письма справедливость постулата доказывается при помощиописания. Обратите внимание на то, что описательные детали, развернутые допредложения, составляют отдельные логические части, следовательно, выполняют функцию аргументирования постулата.DirectionsRead the opening and closing lines ofa business letter and choose one of thegiven descriptions according to theefficiency and sufficiency principle.Draw its logical scheme.ИнструкцияПрочитайте начальные и заключительные строки делового письмаи выберите то из описаний, которое соответствует принципу эффективности и достаточности.
Начертите его логическую схему.Dear Mr. JasonYou are our regular customer, that is why you were the first one to get this offer. Ournew soap base is the most fascinating of our previous products.…We have never before mixed natural soaps with soap bases, but its qualities are astonishing.In case you decide to join in the purchase of this new quality soap base, we will provide three brilliant ideas of how to work with it to you.We are looking forward to your trying Crystal African Black Soap as our best product by far.Sincerely,Robert Shorta) Earlier we produced soap bases which contained natural extracts or vitamins.
Butthis time we added 100% natural African Black Soap. This technology is innovative,because it combines original soap base quality with traditional natural ingredients thathave for centuries been used by African people; as a result, we got the soap base thathelps to balance formula while creating a smooth and creamy texture.b) African Black Soap is known for its ability to cleanse, hydrate and refresh the skin.So, we decided to use it in our innovative product, which made it possible for a meltand pour sop base to balance formula while creating a smooth and creamy texture.c) [1] This vegetable based, sulfate free melt and pour soap base is made using natural African Black Soap.
[2] As a result, we got an innovative and natural product,[3] designed to cleanse, hydrate and refresh the skin. [4] Crystal African BlackSoap helps to balance the formula [5] while creating a smooth and creamy texture.107Sample SchemePostulatespecificationPostulateReasonReason4Reason5Effect2Cause1Specification3Task 4В третьем типе объяснения справедливость постулата доказывается с помощьюповествования.DirectionsRead the opening and closing lines ofa business letter and choose one of thegiven narrations according to the efficiency and sufficiency principle.Draw its logical scheme.ИнструкцияПрочитайте начальные и заключительные строки делового письмаи выберите то из повествований,которое соответствует принципуэффективности и достаточности.Начерти-те его логическую схему.Dear SirsWithin the next four months, I am going to move to your city, and, according to youradvertisement, you are looking for a Financial Supervisor. I am sure you need a specialist with my qualification in your company.…As you can see, my experience perfectly matches your requirements.In case you wish to contact me, I can be reached at (000) 000-0000.Sincerely,Mary Granda) I am currently working as a financial controller for the Morano SupermarketGroup in Seattle, Washington.
I have been responsible for the group's financial direction and control through development of modern computerized controls and moreaccurate reporting. As a result, I contributed significantly to the group's profitable108growth during the past four years. In addition, I have also ensured, that all legal,taxation, and audit requirements were complied with.b) I had worked as an accountant for the Morano Supermarket Group in Seattle, Washington for three years. After that, I was promoted to the position of a financial controller, where my duties include the group's financial direction and control, through tighterforecasting, budgeting, development of modern computerized controls, and more accurate reporting.c) Having married, I moved to Seattle, Washington, where I was lucky to get a job inthe accounting department.
My skills and determination, together with a lot of hardwork, have brought me promotion. I have worked as a financial controller for sevenyears now and think I could perform better in a more challenging environment.Sample SchemePostulatespecificationPostulateReason4ReasonEffect3Cause2Specification1Task 5DirectionsRead the business letter. Underlineredundant information in it and rewrite the letter, avoiding redundancy.ИнструкцияПрочитайте деловое письмо. Подчеркните в нем избыточную информацию и перепишите письмо,избегая избыточности.Dear Mr.
VirtanenWe are trying to locate information on a breed of cat called the Suomi Shorthair andunderstand that you are the leading expert on cats in Finland.We have a client who is interested in buying a Suomi Shorthair. He lives here, in London and has asked us if we could help him find the genuine breed. In fact, he is readyto pay a substantial sum of money, as the cat will be a present to his wife109on a family occasion.
She had seen one once at the London Feline Show but has beenunable to find one since.This client came to our shop and requested that we help him. Since the breed originated in Finland, we thought you might be able to give us some more information. Weare most interested in the names of breeders that may have kittens for sale.We will call you within the next month to follow up on this inquiry and ask to give usthe list of names of Suomi Shorthair breeders. Thank you for all your trouble. We lookforward to talking to you.Sincerely,Kathleen PenceSample LetterDear Mr.
VirtanenWe are trying to locate information on a breed of cat called the Suomi Shorthair.We have a client who is interested in buying this breed. He had seen it once at theLondon Feline Show but has been unable to find one since.As the breed originated in Finland, we thought you might be able to give us somemore information. We are most interested in the names of breeders that may havekittens for sale.We will call you within the next month to follow up on this inquiry. We look forwardto talking to you.Sincerely,Kathleen PenceTask 6DirectionsRead the business letter in which thegiven information is not enough toprove that the postulate is valid.Rewrite the letter, supplying the information necessary to validate thepostulate.ИнструкцияПрочитайте деловое письмо, в котором приведенной информациинедостаточно, чтобы доказатьсправедливость постулата.Перепишите письмо, восполнивнедостаток информации.Dear Mrs.
PattersonWe are happy to introduce our new dress models to you. The design is sure to makeyou look gorgeous!You may find them on our site at www.getdressed.com.If you have any questions, don‘t hesitate to contact us.Sincerely,110Kay LynneSample LetterDear Mrs. PattersonWe are happy to introduce our new line of dresses to you. The design is sure to makeyou look gorgeous! Floral motives, the most popular trend of this season, were our inspiration. Due to them we have managed to create fine designs that we have never hadbefore. In a new dress you will feel really comfortable, as the materials used in production are very skin-friendly.
This time we really exceeded our own success!Please, look for you special dress on our site at www.getdressed.com and enjoy yournew renewed style.If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to contact us.Sincerely,Kay LynneTask 7DirectionsRead the business letters. Completethe Letter of Response, explaining thecauses of the current situation.
Mindthat you should validate the postulateaccording to the principle of efficiency and sufficiency.ИнструкцияПрочитайте деловые письма. Закончите ответное письмо, объясняя причины сложившейся ситуации. Доказательство справедливости постулата должно соответствовать принципу эффективности идостаточности.Initiative LetterDear Ms MansonI am writing to you regarding the dance classes that my daughter Jasmine Wu willhave to miss.The fact is that we have paid the total sum for the previous month.